Andy and Hannah: Your contributions have been critical and you have shown how this piece has come together. Try to include time lines and show how you have set targets for yourselves to improve your grades further. Include your presentation to class and analyse that too. Well done
16/20 Level 4
Ross and Jinesh: You have made some good contributions to your page and I can see how you have been involved with planning. You were involved in this production from the onset, but this blog is largely dominated by Andy and Hannah. Try to comment on all of the parts of the planning process that you can and comment on the posts from the others if you need to. Some more analysis of trailers and how they attract their target audiences will do your cause favours.
13/20 Level 3
Thursday 18 February 2010
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